It looks very good indeed. I have a few suggestions:

1. Where the rivers hit the mountains, I would suggest some valleys - or end the rivers earlier so they don't cross mountains.
2. Again, I'd add a bit more sea in the West, just to make the composition breathe a bit more (and because I assume you can sail past that headland).
3. The labels of towns in the woods are utterly hard to read for me. I'd suggest a gentle cream or pale ochre outer glow effect for all your labels.
4. I demand a townhouse for my Lord, the Dark Bringer of Fuzz, in Angelsway.



Keep it up!