The City of Keys (WIP)

[atpollard]

I really like it. The hand drawn lines look fine to me (learning software is always a good thing, but hardly necessary for this map).

The border isn't quite right. The punched holes at the top seem out of place and I can't quite tell if it is indented to be a tattered edge (in which case there are too many shreds that are unattached but still in place) or a rough painted outline. The 'watermark' in the lower right, takes away from the rest of the map. I would move the copyright to the lower left or right corner (and perhaps match one of the title box fonts).

But I really love the color 'contours' - well done.
I wonder if they could be blended together with a softer transition.

Have some rep.

[Robulous]

Thanks!

Sorry I shoulda clarified, the watermarks and the outline are just a theme to remind me it's a WIP draft, I'd remove these for the finished version.