You seem to have a bunch of rivers that just disappear into mountains. They originate from one mountain, flow into another. While your couple of dead-end lakes do happen in real life (Though they will be VERY salty; cities and fishermen will not be using that water for anything), i would suggest fixing the rivers.
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