I like the modified image and I like how the texture on the balloon came out. But I think the placement is off. If the ship came down softly the air bag should be off to the side as the crew pushes it away from the craft. If the ship came down hard then the air bag would be at least partially on top of the upper deck and draped over the side. But I do not see a simple way for the shop to actually be on top of the collapsed air bag.

I would love to see this in a side view also, picturing it leaning to starboard and all the decks tilted and things piled up against the walls.

BOB