Thanks for the critic, Lyandra and priggs, I'll actually edit the map, you're totally right about the title font fitting better than the city names, and I may have over did it with the dots.

Rdanhenry - The bottom is a swamp, its meant to more spread out than just a delta mouth of a river. I've had more than one odd forshortening comments so maybe that unclear swamp feature is the problem... dang.

mariuccij - Thanks, I hope to perfect it!