I like it so far! Always in favour of having a bit of a story behind a map. The issues I have with it mostly concern the scroll, but I guess that's my personal pet-peeve. When the sides are rolled up like this it makes me wonder what's on that part of the parchment: seems strange to just have empty space there, no? Also, if you would like a more realistic look to your parchment edges I would suggest looking up images of the Dead Sea Scrolls as reference. A little extreme, but it works!