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    Nice start ashgrey, but the brown trees are a bit offsetting, and I am not sure what the path texture is representing...The cliff to the left is clear as to which way it goes, but the other two could be either up or down. Battle maps are not what I do, but if I had an idea of what problem YOU might have with the map, I might be able to help some.

    What prog are you using for this?

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    Wip

    After some feedback, did some more shadowing and texture alignment.

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    Wip

    And yet again more shadowing.

    I'm pretty happy with this, and I think its mosly obvious which way the cliffs are falling now.

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