First map: Streamdales Province

[Freehand 5.5]

The setting is nice. You're doing a great job there.
Headlines could be more readable. Perhaps you can rearrange the ornament to the sides of it instead of layouting it below the typo.
In the timeline you could add a legend of what had happened between -500 and -200 (what caused the builders to disappear from history).
That would give some clue in what condition the ruins are (destroyed or damaged by siege, ruined only by time etc.).

The map is okay. graphics could be better.

[river police alarm] The rivers could be more curved when they flow down the plains.
The lable size is absolutely okay, but the river lables could be set closer to the rivers.
The downright river lable should be curved, too, like the others.[/river police alarm].

More forests would be nice.
The mountain valleys could be a bit more narrow at the end (like in the left one).