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    Cool hand drawn map. I like the little shadow lines you did for buildings and trees / forests, and the mountain shading. Looks like sunrise time with the sun light low in the east. The poem is a bit funny but it's fine, you rhymed. Parchment aging and border are good.

    The one thing I don't like so much is the coffee cup stains, lower left AND top right. Those look like a default Photoshop technique for a modern office-memo look. Do the druids drink that much coffee? Next time you could consider a wine color stain, or perhaps a tear or wrinkle in the paper instead. This effect may have been part of the parchment paper background if you didn't add it intentionally. It's mildly confusing in the Northeast corner where one could wonder if the D. Circle location refers to the circle of stones, or that magical floating coffee stain in the sky.

    Thank you for posting your map!
    Last edited by Gold; 03-04-2013 at 01:05 AM.

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