Welcome to the Guild Jockvonmock! That's a nice looking first map. As an aside, you may wish to repost this in the Regional Maps section where it is likely to receive more traffic, and hence you are likely to receive more feedback. To my eyes, the mountains could be integrated a little better into the landscape by blending their shadows and colore in a bit more (they just seem to cut off at the base). Not a bad looking map though.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh