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    The pine floorboards look much better and the shadows really add a lot to the depth, nice work. I like the angled roof, the only suggestion on that would be that the edges are to perfectly cut off. It would look even better if the edge were slightly irregular.

    Final suggestion is the railing is to plain. The railing shadow looks good but maybe add posts to the railing itself. Something like this for example: Click image for larger version. 

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    The pine floorboards look much better and the shadows really add a lot to the depth, nice work. I like the angled roof, the only suggestion on that would be that the edges are to perfectly cut off. It would look even better if the edge were slightly irregular.

    Final suggestion is the railing is to plain. The railing shadow looks good but maybe add posts to the railing itself. Something like this for example: Click image for larger version. 

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    Thanks for both the kind words and the advices.

    I think I see what you mean about the roof, I will try to go back and "cut" it into a wave shape that suggests that various tiles are interlocking... That's a good advice.

    I see what you mean about the railling... I'll see what I can do. at worst, I will steal the example you posted and spam multiple instance of it... I'll try to have an updated version posted tomorrow...

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