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    Guild Apprentice jturner's Avatar
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    For the imaginitively-challenged, like myself, there's an interesting video on YouTube that shows what a ring around Earth's equator might look like from different points on the surface. Quite nice!

    Regarding your story, does the ring have to collapse? If it does, I'd say make sure it happens near the beginning, not in the middle. I'm not keen when you're reading a story and you invest in the world and the characters, then suddenly everything changes so completely that it becomes a different world and a different story. Anyone who saw 'Knowing' at the cinema will understand what I'm talking about!
    Last edited by jturner; 04-23-2013 at 02:26 PM.

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