The Shaartajar Empire

[Eilathen]

Nice start, luc. Maybe add some color? That would also make it easier to recognize what kind of climate you are aiming for.

And you do have some river issues. The river that splits by the City Al Jazdir for one. River very rarely split downriver...river normally only merge. Now, you might have some fantasy explanation why the river splits that way (then ignore my comment ) but on earth, that is a situation that is very unlikely.

Phew, never thought that i'd be one of those people who lecture about river stuff How about a river police badge for me, eh?! ^^

[luc126]

Thank you for your reply, Ellathen.

The river that splits down is supposed to be like a kind of delta, like que Nile delta (even its name, the Nuhbis river is inspired by the Nile). I dont really know too much about geography, though hehe so thanks for the advise. Ill make a research about it
By the way, I uploaded also the coloured map, even Im not sure which one is better.