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    Guild Adept atpollard's Avatar
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    Overall I really like it.

    I loved the little tear West of the island, and the second handwriting works for me.

    I don't know if the rivers are too jagged, but they feel a little too wide to me.
    I suspect that will end up a trial and error thing to get something that you like.

    The blue feels too intense ... too heavy of an opacity, too light of a shade and too neon of a color.
    Perhaps something a little darker, more of an organic shade of blue and more transparent (like a watercolor wash) would work better with the map style.
    Last edited by atpollard; 10-03-2013 at 11:45 PM.

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