[Region 1][Map 11] The City States of Akron

[Valarian]

More mapped area, including the city of Raedis.
Raedis is a lesser state, not as large or as grand as Akron or Jerat. However, its placement makes it the gateway to the east and trading ships skirting the Akron coastline stop off at Raedis on their way toward the ports of the eastern nations.

Also included is an area known as The Lakes, a cluster of small settlements around a series of lakes to the east of the mountains. The area is independent of the city states, with no tribute owing to any of the city states in the Akron region. Each settlement defends its independence vigorously, but there is a loose alliance between them. Lakton is the largest settlement in the area.

[Ascension]

Lookin pretty sweet so far, no critiques just kudos.

[Midgardsormr]

I think you should explode that scale bar, change the red to the same blue as either your sea or the color you've used for "Torgian Sea", and change the font of "Scale in Miles" to match your small labels.

Or, if you wanted to really dig into it, you could try to make the bar match your neatline--that'd look very nice, I think.