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    I really enjoy the relaxed style found in most
    of your maps. All those houses are amazingly
    well-done, so nice work there. I think you might
    consider making your roads a little more gruff,
    if anything.

    What I like most here is the fact you can see
    how this little village has been growing. It looks
    to me like it must have started with a manor up
    on those hills, and worked down into the
    residences. Newest of all are the farmhouses
    perhaps. I'm not sure if that was intentional
    or not, but looks and works great either way.

    I would agree the green water doesn't fit
    perfectly on this map; it looks more like
    droplets on a waxy piece of paper to me;
    almost floating above the map. Not sure if
    that would be changed if you made it blue.
    The best maps are the ones we like the most after looking at the longest.

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    ...it took a few moments to find the words.

    This is a good map. Clear information, well blended, and colors that make sense.

    This is the kind of map that I would expect to find outside a visitor center for a modern town. It's that good.

    My only concern about the map is that the cumulative cliff width is not equal on both the top and bottom sides of the...Zaimoka hill. Other than that all that I could suggest is a compass.

    Thank you for posting this map.
    Last edited by Ridgewolf; 01-09-2014 at 05:30 PM.

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