Well I was finally able to get back to this and get a bit more done on it. I'm pretty happy with it so far.
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One thing that I am having a hard time with is seeing the "depth" of the map. I can't tell if it is a hill or a crag. By your initial post, it is a crag. I just can't see a sense of the depth.
Other than that it is a great looking map.
Last edited by landorl; 08-05-2008 at 10:02 PM.
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My suggestion would be to make the first drop (from the grass to the first step) more sharply cut. Also, maybe if the water at the bottom was a little bit darker/shadowed by the cliffs around it. Finally, maybe have all the shadows fall in one direction, and at a greater distance to capture the feel that the craig is 100's of feet deep. I guess in summary: shadows are your friend.
Allrighty then, I think I'm done with this one. I've tried to make it appear that it has more "depth" than the last version I uploaded. Hopefully I succeeded.
I added some trees, roads, paths (on the lowest level), more buildings and other items. Enjoy!
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Wow, that made a huge difference!!!!
The new one looks much better, the depth is much more obvious. Not sure on the color difference between the walls/side and the bottom, it is a bit jarring, but I can clearly see what is going on and that is what is important.
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Nice, this map gives me Ideas.
And as my players would say, "that can be dangerous".