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    Ahhh the islands make more sense now. And mountains.

    I do see how you changed the shape, very good, but still a little bit.. idk.. boxy. Much less so, though. Maybe I'll do a gimp-picture-in-paint-sketch to show what I mean... (I like those, the irony amuses me)

    That plate in the middle seems really weird to me. :/ I've never seen a smooshed plate like that?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jalyha View Post
    That plate in the middle seems really weird to me. :/ I've never seen a smooshed plate like that?
    Yeah I know what you mean about the smooshed plate! My thought process with that is that for plot purposes of the world, I need to have the mountains separating the circle bit in the middle from the other half. From my limited knowledge I thought a smooshed plate was possible (albeit unlikely). Also it's not very clear on the image, but the bottom-most plate boundary is meant to be going over the other one, to form a kind of slightly mountainous cliff face, if that makes sense?

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    hmmm...
    I'm really bad at explaining things >.<

    Maybe a pictorial story?

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    And a hero comes along...

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    Of course, I haven't checked any of this for accuracy.. just playing with the voices in my head (and we're messy children, so...) but yeah...


    (Yes, this is my mental process, for real )


    Edit: idk why the links are weird...
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    OMG Jalyha you are my new god!!! I've been thinking of this for WEEKS and you've just blown me out of the water I love it you are a gentleman and a scholar sir!!
    So many thanks you have no idea

    Now for the rest of the world and um... well everything else lmao

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