Miscellaneous map... feedback plz

[anomander]

I've done some work on it as time permits. Thanks for the advice, by the way.
I hope the rivers don't look too awkward...

There is a lot of improvement between the two. The highlands and the lowlands are discernible. But I still can't say which are your rivers and which are your roads. And some of your rivers run straight. I'm pretty sure rivers take a winding path and become small lakes and ponds here and there. Unless, of course, magic of some kind is involved in the land itself. Fantasy does give you some leniency. Lastly, I would like to suggest, use different colors to mark rivers, roads and your elements like trees and mountains. It'll help differentiate as in some places I can see the rivers just drawn over tree or mountain symbols and doesn't look good.