Quote Originally Posted by Midgardsormr View Post
You have "who's sole purpose," which should be "whose sole purpose." Who's is a conjunction meaning "who is," which precludes the use of the apostrophe when turning who into a possessive. Receive is misspelled as recieve (a misspelling that jkat ironically repeated). I didn't see any other errors, unless they refer to the lack of punctuation, which I took to be a stylistic choice.

I love the demonic parody of the Universal Man.
Ah ok. I can't believe I missed that actually, lol. Glad you like the universal/vitruvian demon.