This is looking really good. I really like your hand-drawing style, especially the details like borders and compass rose. I get the sense, from the way the town barely fits on the page, that you don't plan it out carefully in advance, which is something else I like.

I don't really have any suggestions to make, at this stage. I assume you'll be adding some finishing touches, like roof tiles, trees, grass texture etc. Looking at your maps, I think I can see the influence of Larb's work, and there are few better cartographers I can think of (that is meant to be acompliment to both you, and Larb ).

THW