[Award Winner] Creation and Depiction of Fantasy Cities - Parts I & II

[Sirith]

I've read it, and it was a good read.

The only thing I'd say would to shorten some sentences. It is quite readable already, but some sentences could be better split into two or three sentences.

I don't really have much to say about the content right now

[Novarri]

It's been months since anyone posted here, it seems. I declare: this is AWESOME and I can't wait for part II. This is an absolutely brilliant work. I have to ask if you've ever read Italo Calvino's Invisible Cities - I think you'd find it interesting if you haven't.