Reply With QuoteI'd make the blue darker and not so bright. Once you do that you will need to make the greens darker as well, more muted. Try adding in some tan areas in the grass to break it up. Overall good start.
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Hi!
First of all, my short story: four years ago I wrote a novel. It's not famous, but my friends liked it. Two years ago I started working on something bigger, a whole world with it's own solar system, flora, fauna, nations (ofc with a little magic) and a unique language. Now I have a lot of notes, I have everything to build my planet and when it's ready I will start writing. This is a practice map, I'm not sure that will be a real part of my world. Please help me, I need critism. (:
(and sorry for my poor english)
I'd make the blue darker and not so bright. Once you do that you will need to make the greens darker as well, more muted. Try adding in some tan areas in the grass to break it up. Overall good start.
If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
-J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)
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Thank you the reply! Something like this?
That's coming along nicely. Blue still seems too vivid and pure, add some green to the mix and make it a little more teal. Try adding some sand color to the land unless this is supposed to be a jungle, if so then it's pretty close to looking jungle-like.
If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
-J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)
My Maps ~ My Brushes ~ My Tutorials ~ My Challenge Maps
