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    Default WIP - Udhillayah - City on the edge of the desert

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    Hello,
    It's been a while (like 4 years) but I have recently started up my cartography again,
    since I am the dungeon master for a new D&D campaign.

    I am looking for tips and critiques on this map.
    The City of Udhilayah, a city on the edge of the desert with about 5000 inhabitants.

    My main concerns with the design are the folowing:
    - It seems to empty. What is it missiing? More trees? Textures? Objects?
    - The river does not seem to merge in with the background that well. Any tips on that?

    Thanks,
    Jan

    *updated version*

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    Last edited by woekan; 12-09-2014 at 05:34 AM.

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