Quote Originally Posted by delgondahntelius View Post
Here's what she sent me:


So maybe that gives you an idea...
(In a world.... I keep thinking of that movie announcer guy... lol)
Hmm, my 2 cents: it is well written but a bit vague. The text does feel like a movie announcement... but then you have pictures supporting it. I have no idea what to expect of the story yet.
The concept of humans being the "fantasy creatures" *is* cool by the way.


Quote Originally Posted by Steel General View Post
*OFF TOPIC* Just in case you're interested, here are some things I posted over ar CBG

The White Wolves

The Prize

and some others @ PlotStorming

A Day In The Life

A Father Takes Notice/A New Beginning (2 parts)
Obviously Steel General you are a skilled mapper, but you can also write
I agree with the comments on the first story. The stuff feels like it has all been done before in the fantasy genre, but it's still interesting and well written.

Oh, and I noticed you played Ultima Online. For which I had to rep you

Anyway, back to the normal thread I think, before we stray too far.