Riverbank Jetties

[mmmmmpig]

I am simply in awe of your water...

[Steel General]

I am simply in awe of your water...

I agree the water is magnificent! The rest of the map is very good too, you may want to consider verying the plants at the southern edge abit.

But that's really a minor thing and more of a preference than any kind of criticism.

[Torq]

It looks nice, 2 comments from me, first is I am not sure on the texture you have used for sand, looks a bit odd to me.

2nd (which may be on the to do list) is the lack of tents etc

The sand is supposed to be mud. If thats not coming across I'll have to work on it a bit. I do plan to add more signs of life like tents.

Looks splendid. My only concern is that the map borders cramp it a bit. If they come in by water or along the beach then you might need enough map for a bow shot.

Thanks Red. My players will be coming from the trees, but I take the point. I was aware of the need for bow range when starting the map, but I think I messed up the scale by making the jetties too big and then everything followed that scale.

I am simply in awe of your water...

Thanks Pig. The water texture is layed over the stones with about 50% transparency. Between the two is a black to transparent gradient to create the illusion of increasing depth. The foam bits are foam coveres downloaded from the dunjinni site and edited and placed manually.

Torq