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    Wip Sewer with cavern

    Bah!

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    This is not quite gelling for me. It's the bridges. They're too flat. Also too clean. They should be grimy with moss and muck, and curvy.

    Meanwhile, the cave area really is supposed to be all dirt, but it's not looking very good. Too little variation between the walls and the floor, I think. I tried converting the walls to natural stone, but it just looked silly when everywhere else on the map was dirt.

    Suggestions on those? I've gotta get this knocked out so I can get it printed for this weekend.

    EDIT:

    Here's revision 2:

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    I put together some new bridges. They're still flat rather than curved, but at least they're dirtied up.

    The dirt of the cave floor is considerably lighter. That helps a bit, but I'm still not entirely happy with it.

    I can't stand to look at the thing any more right now. Maybe something will occur to me in the morning.
    Last edited by wdmartin; 05-14-2015 at 01:23 AM. Reason: Adding a new version.

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