Unnamed fantasy map for P&P

[elTotih]

Hey folks,
so this is my current project and it will be the first map i show to you. As you can see still in progress, its made on thick paper and is drawn with aquarel pencils and with a variety of hard and soft pencils.
To the world itself until this date its unnamend because until now i didnt had a good idea of a name that fits it properly. I made this for a pen and paper game i make right now.
So i hope you like it and i be glad if i get some feedback about whats ok and what could be done better.
ps. I apologize for mistakes or wrong gramatic. (not my mother language)

[J.Edward]

From what I can see it looks good... but that is a pretty poor photograph. Why is the lighting so... well, bad?
Couldn't you get near a light perhaps? It's a shame to not show this off a bit better with a better photo.
That said, I still think you've done a good job elTotih.
Please, try to get some better photos. I'm glad you posted these.
Hope to see more of your maps - just scan them or maybe try for better lighting.
Welcome to the Guild.

[Chick]

Looks like an interesting map!

I like your icons, but I would worry that the castle mountain is disturbing. It's simply too heavy to support itself like that and thus looks very strange and impossible. I would also worry a little bit about size ... having a stone wall as large as the mountains is also strange.

Otherwise, it has great possibilities! Hope to see more, and I hope you manage to get better photos so we can see the details better.

[elTotih]

thank you for the feedback

From what I can see it looks good... but that is a pretty poor photograph. Why is the lighting so... well, bad?
Couldn't you get near a light perhaps? It's a shame to not show this off a bit better with a better photo.

yeah the pictures turned out to be quite bad but until now i didnt find a copyshop in my area who could handle the size of the map but i will look on to finde one

but I would worry that the castle mountain is disturbing. It's simply too heavy to support itself like that and thus looks very strange and impossible. I would also worry a little bit about size ... having a stone wall as large as the mountains is also strange.

youre right the mountain turned out a bit to big, luckily the mountaincastle has a major role in the game so if you look at it in the game it wouldnt bother so much but when i do another one i try to keep the icons in the same size.
the wall is acctualy ment to be this big (in the story a few hundreds time to build to sepperate to minor countrys but i get your point
another time thanks for the feedback