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    Default ghampronk ulb : Orc's cave

    Hi all,

    This is my first map. It's a cave that host a big Orc tribe, the Blue Faces. They are warg riders and they are crual of course.

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    Let me know the improvment I should make.

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    Hi Guzim, good to see your first map!
    I like the brown colour and texture you've got going. I would make the cave edge a bit more jagged and would get rid of the white background. Instead, I'd put an off-white colour, just so it doesn't look blank. Your contour lines (I assume) seems a bit out of place to me for an underground map and if you do want them, I'd smooth them out a bit more.
    Hope to see more work from you!
    If you want more advice on maps, I'd post them in the Regional/World Mapping sub-forum as a WIP, rather than a finished map!

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