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    The mountains and forests really rock. Beautiful work, Torq. I almost prefer this to your usual style, the understatement makes it really easy on the eye and makes the labels the centre of attention.

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    Its lovely, and the colour palette is really great.

    I'm curious about the dry river in the SE - was that intentional?

    I'd also recommend emphasising the mountain shading a little more - I found them a little too subtle to pick out.

    Otherwise - very lovely indeed. You certainly deserve rep for this one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by torstan View Post
    Its lovely, and the colour palette is really great.

    I'm curious about the dry river in the SE - was that intentional?

    I'd also recommend emphasising the mountain shading a little more - I found them a little too subtle to pick out.

    Otherwise - very lovely indeed. You certainly deserve rep for this one.
    I agree that the mountains (and also forests) are perhaps a little too subtle. But you can't amp it up too much, or it'll mess with the overall style and palette of the map. But perhaps it could be tweaked ever-so-slightly?

    Even so, it's a very nice looking map!

    Also: I too noticed the dry riverbed...
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