What's with the "river" north from Almashys connecting the two bodies of water? I thought that it might be a canal, but why on earth would anyone dig a canal in a place like that, when you appear to have a natural channel just a short way to the west? Also, what are all those triangles? Mountains maybe?

I like the style and look of the map. Changing the font could go a long ways toward giving it more of a fantasy feel, if that's your goal.