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    This looks really good Josiah
    Nice variation in the terrains, which look splendid.
    This is a fine looking map.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mouse View Post
    Its the sort of map that I could stare at and make up stories about, so its pretty darned good already
    Thanks Mouse!

    Quote Originally Posted by thomrey View Post
    The look of it is better, more textures, more gritty I'd say. If it's for a novel, the screen size will do and it perfectly shows what needs to be seen. The texture of your coasts has a really good look When the map is seen zoomed out, you got a gift for judging the good amount of detail in the format you're asked.
    Thanks Thomrey!
    Actually it took me a long time to choose the style and detail, so I wouldn't say I'm so good.

    Quote Originally Posted by J.Edward View Post
    This looks really good Josiah
    Nice variation in the terrains, which look splendid.
    This is a fine looking map.
    Thanks J.! It means a lot!


    Here's an update. Fixed some of the labels, added a simple compass rose and a acorn emblem for the land.

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    Let me know what you think please!

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    Wow, I love the linework for the mountains, and the coniferous forest in the south looks magnificent!

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    Do you use some sort of pencil brush ?

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    I like the acorn
    Only suggestion would be to maybe make the outer lines just a bit darker/stronger.
    It fades a little. Not quite as strong as the coast lines, but something more in that direction.
    That would make it a bit more visually strong.
    All in all, it is looking great.
    I really like the rough land out around Knute.
    The pine forest looks nice too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Wired View Post
    Wow, I love the linework for the mountains, and the coniferous forest in the south looks magnificent!
    Thanks Wired!

    Quote Originally Posted by thomrey View Post
    Do you use some sort of pencil brush ?
    Actually, no. I use a hard round brush at 4px for basically the whole thing.

    Quote Originally Posted by J.Edward View Post
    I like the acorn
    Only suggestion would be to maybe make the outer lines just a bit darker/stronger.
    It fades a little. Not quite as strong as the coast lines, but something more in that direction.
    That would make it a bit more visually strong.
    All in all, it is looking great.
    I really like the rough land out around Knute.
    The pine forest looks nice too.
    Thank you so much J!
    Yes, I agree with you. I drew it on a bigger scale and made it smaller.
    Glad you like the pine forests!

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    Excellent! The fields near Trume and the tower of silence are impressive. The crown and acorn are also nice additions.

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