Ashtalon World Map

[whipstache]

Here's the final version of The Fantastic Realm of Ashtalon, a private commission.

It's my first crack at doing straight black & white. I hope to continue to improve; all feedback welcome.

[whipstache]

I realized I should have put this in the Finished Maps section. Can someone point me to who I need to contact to get it moved?

[ChickPea]

Moved the thread for you.

Map looks great!

[whipstache]

Thanks Chickpea!

[kacey]

Very nice!

[Meshon]

This is great, your black and white elements are working really well, I mean, it doesn't feel like it's missing colour, it feels complete

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[onez]

Not bad at all! Keep it up!

[Caenwyr]

I like the map a LOT! It's certainly gorgeous in its simplicity. The only thing I kinda miss is a way to tell the water apart from the landmass in once simple glance. A darker shade of grey in the background, or maybe some horizontal hashing along the shoreline would have helped lead my eye along.

Also, due to a lack of shading that gorge west of Vayga's home seems somewhat weird to me, but I'm sure that's just my weird brain.

But that's just a nitpick - overall I think the map works wonderfully!

[ThomasR]

Very nice map, clean and legible ! Well done !

[FrancescaBaerald]

Very nice job!