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    Looking good Luhrmanz. Some suggestions/critique:

    - Add a Glow (outer) to the waterfalls. Make it a white glow with a lot of blur. That will give the impression of "spray".
    - Your fields still need some work. Try decreasing the "Edge fade, inner".
    - The road to the lone building to the east ends too abruptly. Using the "Square, dirt" tool you can create a nice ending for it.
    - The houses northwest of the square are too pointy. Slice off a bit and lay down some dirt using the "Square, dirt" tool.
    - I would add some more dirts roads near the houses that are not connected to dirt roads. People need to get to their houses.
    - Maybe add a few more houses with a different color/type of roof.
    - The second bridge looks a bit too big for the buildings. You might want to decrease its size.

    What software do you use to create the PDF? If you use PDF Creator it's possible to save as PNG, JPG, etc.
    Last edited by Gandwarf; 02-02-2009 at 01:23 PM.
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