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    I think they're drawn decently enough, they're very stylistically regular at least. When I look at it the thing is more that they're very noticeably sharp and stark compared to the style of the other terrain features, which feel more subdued. It might be something that could be helped just by tweaking the fill color a bit to be (somewhat) less distinct from the base coloration, or maybe by adding a little bit of subtle shading work.

    It's a nice abstract informational-style layout, especially the forest representation style.

    EDIT: On second thought you might also look at the line weight for the mountains as well. What I wanted to get at was that the linework/hand-drawing itself seems fine.
    Last edited by AzureWings; 08-01-2018 at 03:33 PM.

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