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    Guild Artisan Hoel's Avatar
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    I love the style. I think the houses are a bit big, but I kan really see what you're trying to do with the symbol thing.
    The desert looks.. unfinished, can't really say either way there. The mountains look really nice, you've got my approval at least.
    One small thing I don't like is the fields. You should go with a dark green or maybe yellow or brown instead of black. You've captured the countour of the lands nicely with the field patterns.
    I'll keep an eye on this

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    Guild Journeyer Morkhdull's Avatar
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    The comic's look is fine. Giving the overall a feeling a freshness and "kind of happiness"...

    This style of map describes an atmosphere where, usually, long sentences and many words overwhelm the details...

    I enjoy Bravo !

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