My most recent map, I would love some feedback on it.

[MirmanMapping]

I just made this map and would love some feedback on it.

[Arimel]

That looks really good and the lettering at the top is really well done. The lettering on the smaller towns though could be done a bit clearer. However, a really good map over all and an excellent first post!

[the_man]

I think it look good but be careful to the compass rose, the black exceeds it. You hsould use a ruler.

[Edward II of Kenland]

This looks nice! I will say that it does need a map key though as I don't know what the symbols for Kark, Tonk, and Tintle indicate. I really think overall this is a very good execution of this style!

[Bindusara]

You seems using two size of felt, and i think none of the two are black enough. When zooming, we see transparency, shades of greys in the lines.
Sometimes you swap from one size to another, and i think the transition is sometimes not very good.
Trunks of your woods are sometimes too inclined (near Seckur for example, or between Achbe and Tonk)
Sharpen your lines for the city symbols, it's drooling.

But even with all this said : I like the global design! When not zoomed, it's very good!