Working on a publication: Kaidan

[DevinNight]

Congrats and nice job on getting it all together.

[Gamerprinter]

Thanks everyone!

I forgot to mention about a week after publication I should have a Map Folio available as a low cost download which will be "flavored" for MapTool, Battlegrounds, Fantasy Grounds and others for VTT use as well. The Map Folio will contain all the maps from the adventure plus several that are not.

Another format for the adventure.

GP

[Karro]

This is looking wonderful. If I was such as had time to RP these days... this would end up on my wishlist. (It might still, despite the lack of RP time, if it makes it out as a dead-tree.)

[Coyotemax]

I tried opening it and got an error message ..
"There was an error opening this document. There was a problem reading this document(14)"

[Steel General]

I tried opening it and got an error message ..
"There was an error opening this document. There was a problem reading this document(14)"

I had no problems opening it (Acrobat Reader 8.1)

[Gamerprinter]

I'll check on what is causing that, though I had no problem and I'm using Acrobat 7.0 Pro to create it.

GP

[Coyotemax]

How odd. I tried again, and this time it works fine.

If you updated something, that worked. if not, I have no idea what happened the first time round.

Now to read...

[Coyotemax]

would you like us to call out typos and such if we catch them?

p32 under section 6 -

Dominate

- a form of possession of a living

person, that results in the total dominance

of the possessed. Death to the possessee is

eminent if and when the domination ends.

Perhaps you meant to use Imminent (likely to occur at any moment; impending: Her death is imminent. ) - eminent means high in station, rank, or repute; prominent; distinguished: eminent statesmen.

p33 has a number of grammar issues as well, but it appears you're still working on the writeups through there.

(the overall looks good so far, however. very straightforward, and I really like the way the spirits are set up - the specific nature of each death determines the spirit that results - that always made way more sense then generic undeads)

[Gamerprinter]

Pointing out typos and grammatical issues will certainly, help, though I will need to have the publisher/editor/proof reader to review those specific pages that need changes, prior to module release.

Thank you, Coyotemax, on agreeing with my direction in the use of undead in Kaidan versus standard D&D/Pathfinder versions of them.

GP

[torstan]

Looking good. I'm really pleased to see this is going well. Congrats on all the hard work. Looks like you've got a cracking product on your hands (and the illustrations are really lovely).