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    All the subtle details that are making their way into this are really making it great. Always love seeing your bold style, Omri.

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    I love detailed maps of smaller areas like cities and villages. And I love the concept of your city setting in a unique environment telling a story. Very creative! As for the palette I like the dark look and feel (the clouds also work well to give it a bit of a darker feel as if something bad is upcoming... ). The contrast on the top of the cliffs is a bit low in my opinion. Maybe you could lighten up the colors in some places where the sun hits them like you did with the mountain sides (for example at the tree-tops). This way the whole piece may get a bit more depth, so it stands out more...

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    I really love the map. It makes one wonder, why do the people live under the tableau and not on top ...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Adfor View Post
    All the subtle details that are making their way into this are really making it great. Always love seeing your bold style, Omri.

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    I am glad you like the style. And yeah, I am one for the little details, I like thinking about the story it adds to the map. Thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by Djekspek View Post
    I love detailed maps of smaller areas like cities and villages. And I love the concept of your city setting in a unique environment telling a story. Very creative! As for the palette I like the dark look and feel (the clouds also work well to give it a bit of a darker feel as if something bad is upcoming... ). The contrast on the top of the cliffs is a bit low in my opinion. Maybe you could lighten up the colors in some places where the sun hits them like you did with the mountain sides (for example at the tree-tops). This way the whole piece may get a bit more depth, so it stands out more...
    Thanks a bunch. I am with you on having a more unique environment for telling the story.

    On the contrast on top being less pronounced. I hear you. I haven't yet finished with all the lineart, so those kind of things still has to happen. Hopefully soon.

    Quote Originally Posted by EricPoehlsen View Post
    I really love the map. It makes one wonder, why do the people live under the tableau and not on top ...
    Tx, I appreciate it. There is more than one reason from the top of my head. One being the Storm Swept plains that stretches north west on the plateau.

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    It looks good, XCali.

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    Hey, I thought there'd be another update by now!

    Your maps always evolve so quickly. It's fun to watch. I like the new stuff on top of the plateau.
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    Quote Originally Posted by KaiAeon View Post
    It looks good, XCali.
    Thanks


    Quote Originally Posted by Kisachik the Wanderer View Post
    Hey, I thought there'd be another update by now!

    Your maps always evolve so quickly. It's fun to watch. I like the new stuff on top of the plateau.
    Impatient I see! Hehe, I was busy trying out some experimental stuff.

    Aww, and thank you. I'm glad you enjoy it.

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    Question Whatcher's Inn

    I'm getting closer to calling this one. Just a few touch ups maybe left. If there is something you would want me to see polish or add, let me know

    Okay, so apart from adding the Watcher's Inn, doing the Title, I went on an initial polishing spree. But, I am wondering about something. If I should keep ALL the icons the same color, or go with individual colors? Any ideas on that front?

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    This one is a lot of small changes to polish the map a bit more. I'm getting to the point where I'm wondering if I should change anything else. I've already added the Storm Drain Icons in two places. Though, I am wondering if I should add a sewer icon as well.

    Anyway, let me know what you think,

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    This is -besides being a map- a piece of art! A thing that may be improved a bit is the title. The black font on the dark element gives a nice dark look but it makes it a bit hard to read the title. Anyway, it looks really good, nice work!

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