Wow, that is quite a change. And may I say: WOW, you guys are getting good at this stuff. I am really impressed by your latest work. I like the black & white feel, although I would also like to see a version where the tomb itself is colored. I really like the layout of the tomb and the textures and props you used.

Some text suggestions:

First paragraph:
- the first sentence is too long. You should probably break it up.
- "none" should be "noone" I think.

Second paragraph:
- "demenour" should be "demeanour" I think.

Third paragraph:
- end the first sentence after "hunting accident"

Sorry, but sometimes the editor in me breaks loose...