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    I think your map and its description are very promising The bottom-center especially so, with the short mountain range, hillside forests and rivers. Very visually appealing, and the marshes are a nice touch. But what confuses me is how much that is in contrast with your northern border. Here I can't help but feel a strong sense of repetition in the mountain range, even though on closer inspection it does look very unique. I'm not sure what causes this, but it could be due to its vast length I hope these are among the kind of comments you were looking for. I hope to see more soon!
    Last edited by Kristoni; 05-05-2009 at 04:11 PM. Reason: Clarification

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