World of Kesumi - The Free States

[landorl]

OK, I have been rather busy and haven't been able to do an update in a while, but here is a new one.

I have changed the colors slightly, and have done a different woodlands style as I wasn't happy with the original one. I like this style, but may change the color.

I have also reduced the symbols size, and the font size a little. Please let me know if the fonts are too small.

[Ascension]

I like this a lot, very clean and topographical/atlasy (not sure what that style is really called). Fonts and symbols look good to me. If anything, I'd lighten the rivers and darken that red for the borders a lil bit. Nice job tho.

[Sirith]

I like the lighter colours, but the forests less so. The fonts are a little hard to read to me, now that they're smaller. Perhaps using a different colour than the yellow may work, or just increase their size again.

Overall I like it . Nice subtle hills dotting the landscape and many-branched rivers. Keep it up