May/June Lite Entry: Gulf of Malabor

[gilgamec]

Looks like I got in before the contest closed. As suggested above, I've reduced the size of the text in the cartouche. There's probably all sorts of other tweaks I could make, but I think I'll leave it at this.

Thanks again to everyone who offered praise and criticism. This map isn't quite of the level of the others in the Challenge, but it'll certainly not be my last.

[Immolate]

I love the simple style of this map, with hints of sophistication (the mountains!) lurking here and there. When the task at hand is presenting information clearly and deliberately, this map gets it done very well. Good job!

[Steel General]

I agree with Waldronate... reduce the font size and maybe even put it in its own little 'box' rather than expanding the border.