I like the this a lot. What program did you use to create this? I was wondering if there was a way for you to add something a little extra to the Meg-Lev lines to make it stand out better. Perhaps a minor outer glow or a thin stroke (outline)? Personally I don't have a problem with the red but I can see how others might.

As for Ravi's suggestion about it being too shiny for a cyberpunkesque setting I guess it would depend on how the city was trying to present itself. The city might be trying to present an image as a shining technological beacon of hope in reality it is a mechanical nightmare. Arkm, your city sounds like it would fit right in with a Shadowrun game. Keep up the great work!