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    Notes Image 1
    lack of mountain feeding that short river into the lake.

    Notes Image 2
    jungle and swamp. remove extra tree or two
    Mountains should tapper towards the sea in Thess
    Bennaccio too large, populate that area with some trees


    Notes Image 3
    islands should have nothing on them at all - (yeah, I was thinking that myself)
    mountain is sitting a touch too close to the coastline

    Notes Image 4
    Can that scale be adjusted? - (i was waiting for you to say something about that, heh)

    Notes Image 5
    Island thingy mentioned earlier.
    mountains should be larger as there is one pass
    some small mountains around that trapped loch
    - left a gap in there for you between 2 of the big ones

    Notes Image 6
    no apparent action required at this time

    Notes Image 7
    Mithras Vale, there should be mountains coming down this side

    Notes Image 8
    mountain plateau plain. mountains on this side as well.

    Notes Image 9
    All these areas need more mountains. The ones to the south should be large all to the coast.

    Notes Image 10
    swamp there according to the hex map. Can it be added? - (i kept looking at that area thinking something was missing...)

    The volcano though needs to be blurred

    Certainly if there are reasons for certain things let me know.
    - (I was trying to keep areas from filling up too much with terrain in anticipation of adding text is all)
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