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    I do see the fog, looks really nice so far. I'd like to see it darker if it is a swamp but as it is I think you're on to something.
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    Like this ?
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    That looks like a "fun" town to live in
    If there were cars I would say it's all smog. Anyway, nice effect!
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    Ooh, that's starting to look spooky.

    (I actually caught myself saying that out loud, heh)

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    I confess I don't like this latest version...
    But since I'm reading and translating Fantasycraft, time for cartography is freezed...

    Be back in a couple of days, or two...
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    It's not so much I'm looking at it considering that would be done, but i'm looking at it going "i like the direction it's headed"

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    Last time, it looks that Kelfent was a Burnt Ash city...

    BEUUUUURKH

    The fog was redone... A better way, I hope....

    What do you think about ?
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    That's nice. Easier to see with my glasses on, but that actually helps the fog effect

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    This version looks much better than the earlier ones. The original, unsaturated border was horrible. The overall layout is interesting and appealing but I dislike the trees (green things), especially the star-shaped ones. If you decide to stick with the trees, rotate some of them so they look more natural.

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    Great map Morkhdull!

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