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    Try a color overlay on the escarpments. They look out of sorts and contrast too much being in black like that.

    Otherwise, looks great, I like the effect they create.

    edit: I also just realized that where the road crosses the stream, it just looks odd. I realize that the stream is probably shallower there but... I think it's the texture you have outlining the road at that point that throws off me eyes. The river flowing over that point in road would make it a bit different in that spot... I'd suggest either removing the outline across that portion totally or maybe a good blurring of the outline in that area to reflect the work of the constantly flowing water.

    One last note, on the stream, the shading looks great but, at the top of the stream, where there is a small pondlike area, you should burn the shadow in a bit more towards the center.
    Last edited by Duvik; 07-21-2007 at 03:04 PM. Reason: adding an observation

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