Sep/Oct Lite - Sacrifice Hill

[Avulsion]

Looks great so far. Here is a tip that, in my opinion, would really improve the hill: you should eliminate the "uniformity" of the slopes. This means that you should make one side of the hill steep, another side gentle, and another side somewhere in between. Mix it up. In order to look more natural, it needs more variation in slope steepness.

Examples to give you some ideas:
http://www.prlc.net/PDFs/ByePreserve06.pdf
http://msnbcmedia.msn.com/j/msnbc/Co...g_6a.widec.jpg
http://www.sacred-destinations.com/e...aerial-tor.jpg

Edit: Have you thought about making it a battle map (with square or hexagonal grid)? It seems to be the right scale, if you want to try that. If you choose to do that, here is a helper: http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q=hexagonal%20grid

[Ascension]

Uniformity, great eye Avulsion. I couldn't put my finger on it but you did.

[Xyll]

So here are a few alterations i tried to bleed out some of the solid edges to reduce the uniformity. I also added the pentagram I am not sure if it works and i am thinking of either blending it more or enhancing it a more of a shine not sure yet which direction. Or if I should use it at all I just feel this needs something more to it and i am still not sure what.