Version 2!
I removed the neighboring country as my story really has no use for it. Cleaned up the clutter from the upper left hand corner and made the city names a little less pronounced.
The biggest change was adding StarRaven's calligraphic map symbols (thanks!). I like the way they turned out and hope to do some more edits in the near future based around them. Needs more forest and swamps?
Thoughts and comments welcome, thanks.