Pretty good. Keep it up.
Version 2!
I removed the neighboring country as my story really has no use for it. Cleaned up the clutter from the upper left hand corner and made the city names a little less pronounced.
The biggest change was adding StarRaven's calligraphic map symbols (thanks!). I like the way they turned out and hope to do some more edits in the near future based around them. Needs more forest and swamps?
Thoughts and comments welcome, thanks.
"I see, said the blind man, as he picked up his hammer and saw."
That's a very nice map.
It has a Wild West feel to it.